Reflection, what I did well, what needed improvement.
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What I think I did well:
- I had done a lot better with my volume projecting
- I also did a lot better compared to the rough draft with my line memorization
- I think I did a good job of adding more motion into my movements and moving with a purpose rather than not knowing what my plan was. I think that I also did better with some of my costumes, I think that by wearing a solid one one color piece and taking away shoes I could demonstrate that we were in a poverty-stricken location
- similarly, having a few but really purposeful props helped me have more ideas for staging and what it was that I wanted to do.
- I think that I also did a relatively good job using the whole stage that I had access to. I made sure to use levels by standing and sitting and sitting lower when I was in prison. Also making sure that I was behind and higher than my mother when she had died.
- I think that I did a good job of having the food on the desk at the beginning and bringing it with me to the prison but making sure to leave it there
What I think I could have done better/worked on more:
- I think that I could have varied my tone and volume.
- I thought that I also still was very static even though I added some more movement I think that I could have used more levels and make sure that I was in front of my desk and maybe have more levels with the prison sequence.
- I think that I also could have been clearer with my lines and make sure that they were delivered with different amounts of emotion rather than having emotion or almost none.
- I think I also could have prepared myself better in terms of my lines.
- I could have worked more on making my costume better, by making sure the greens were the same and I don't think the sweater is the best option that I could have used.
- I also think that I could have added some movements during the conclusion, I feel like I either stood or sat for most of the time and I could have done more "busy work".
- I think that I could have also maybe used some background props to make the set seem a little bit more like a home rather than just a few things placed on the desk
- I could have made a scene where I prepared and wrapped the food, because I think it was unclear as to what it was.
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